I think that the picture you used made the poem much better. I loved all of the nonsense words you used. My favorite would have to be glorastic because it sounds cool. I also loved how you ended your poem. Glorastic job!
I really enjoyed your poem! I think that it has such a great visual. It really made the poem come alive and it had details everywhere I looked. You also used a lot of onomatopoeia! I really love how you described the fairies saying "Ting Ting" What were you inspired by? I also love your title, it really got me wondering to what the poem was about. Amazing job! ♡☆
Leanna - Your visual is perfect!!! The word glorastic is very creative. Your nonsense words sound like they do belong in this poem. Does that even make sense? Well overall great job on your poem.
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ReplyDeleteI think that the picture you used made the poem much better. I loved all of the nonsense words you used. My favorite would have to be glorastic because it sounds cool. I also loved how you ended your poem. Glorastic job!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem! I think that it has such a great visual. It really made the poem come alive and it had details everywhere I looked. You also used a lot of onomatopoeia! I really love how you described the fairies saying "Ting Ting" What were you inspired by? I also love your title, it really got me wondering to what the poem was about. Amazing job! ♡☆
Leanna - Your visual is perfect!!! The word glorastic is very creative. Your nonsense words sound like they do belong in this poem. Does that even make sense? Well overall great job on your poem.
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